The Big Cat Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 Hey, Jesse Bartolis, nobody cares about you. Write an article about K.Mitch and keep [you] out of it.
The Big Cat Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 Hey, Jesse Bartolis, nobody cares about you. Write an article about K.Mitch and keep [you] out of it. EDIT: Just to be clear, Jesse, you referred to yourself 34 times in an article about someone the public actually knows about.
/dev/null Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 Quote I go to school at St. John Fisher College in Rocehster, NY where the Buffalo Bills hold their training camp. College That article read like something written by an 6th grader
gomper Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 WTF? Bet his 3 year old can write better than him!
Fred Smerlas's Moustache Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 Hopefully he's not taking a journalism class. That was an affront to the written word.
DevilsAlum Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language.
WWVaBeach Posted August 15, 2009 Posted August 15, 2009 DevilsAlum said: Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language. That was the 1st thing that crossed my mind.
High Mark Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 Come on guys, its hard to right articles about the NFL.
WWVaBeach Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 Thoner7 said: Come on guys, its hard to right articles about the NFL.
jshockeyguy7 Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 DevilsAlum said: Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language. Maybe they just need a better teacher.
crazyDingo Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 I wanted to commint on the above mentioned article which I read through a link posted on this website about this article. I am usually reading these links when I read that their was an article about the BuffaloBills football team of which I am a fan and though I like to watch their games. I thought the article was good and was intersting too. It was written by a college student of St. John college where he was also a student. I likd the article too.
ExWNYer Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 He's such a "fan" of the Gints and Mitchell that he refers to the LB not once...but TWICE...as "KAWKIA".
Lori Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 Painful. Some of the staff bios aren't much better. Are they hiring copy editors, I wonder?
Marv's Neighbor Posted August 16, 2009 Posted August 16, 2009 fallen627 said: Good God, reading that is painful. He has a future at the New York Times.
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