ans4e64 Posted May 29, 2009 Share Posted May 29, 2009 As I look across the distance that stands between us, the mountains, the Oceans, the deserts, they all seem small in comparison to you. I can see you standing there, waving, smiling, counting on me, waiting for me. With every step I take, you grow ever nearer. The dangers I face are just a testament of my love for you, nothing will stop me, nothing will stand in my way. As my journey nears its end, my body grows weak, but my resolve stiffens. Now many Legions stand before me. With sword in my hand, the warrior in me awakens. The path I make is set in stone, right from the start, straight through the heart. The wounds I take are fatal, my blood spills to the ground like a waterfall, my vision fails me, I fall to my knees and I pray. Please Lord, let me see her face, let me feel her touch, just once before I go, please, its all I ask. I see you standing before me, then kneeling down, your hands touching my cheeks, your tears fall to my face as they mix with mine. Tears of joy, tears of sadness, tears of our undying love. So many things I want to say, I want you to know, this is how it was meant to be, it was all worth it. Dying in your arms is better than living without you. As I say goodbye, and my light turns to darkness, know that I love you, I have always loved you, will always love you, My Heaven is in your heart... I can't even make fun of you because I'm impressed with the brass ones you must have to post this on here. Takes some serious mambojambos. Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted May 29, 2009 Share Posted May 29, 2009 I can't even make fun of you because I'm impressed with the brass ones you must have to post this on here. Takes some serious mambojambos. Nice job! Its really hard to embarrass myself any more now than I have in the past. I realize the short story or poetry in general isn't for everybody and some of these guys who took stabs at me probably did it in fun so there's no hard feelings. Its just hard not to take something like this a little personal, because it is, well, personal. The reason I posted them is for the few folks that would enjoy reading them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 SKOOBY'S Song ( heavy metal ) Jade, on a concave afternoon, Paid, with a lisp but coming through, Weighed, but like a rock that breaks in two, Somethings gone arye, somethings run amuck, Like to get away, but I think I'm stuck, and your invited back next week to this locality, to have a heaping helping of my post insanity, this is SKOOBY's Song , filled with snakes and snails and puppy dog trails, So don't take your shoes off, but ya'll come back now, ya hear !!! lol, this is an actual song that my nephew sings really well now, so thanks SKOOB, your an inspiration to all of us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lurker Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Upon reading this I am reminded of Sturgeon’s Revelation.... That sure applies to TSW. May be a tad generous, in fact... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Fischer Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hoodoo voodoo, seven twenty one two Haystacka hostacka, ABC High poker, low joker, ninety-nine-a-zero Sidewalk, streetcar, dance a goofy dance Blackbirdy, bluejay, one, two, three, four Trash sack, jump back, EFG Biggy hat, little hat, fatty man, skinny man Grasshopper greensnake, hold my hand Hoodoo voodoo, chooka-chooky-choo-choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Momma cat, Tommy cat, diapers on my clothes line Two, four, six, eight, I run and hide Pretty girl, pretty boy, pony on a tin can I'll be yours, you'll be mine Hoodoo voodoo, chooka-chooky-choo-choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Jinga jangler, tinga lingle, picture on a bricky wall Hot and scamper, foamy lather, huggle me close Hot breeze, old cheese, slicky slacky fishy tails Brush my hair, kissle me some more Hoodoo voodoo, chooka chooky choo choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Hoodoo voodoo, chooka chooky choo choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Kissle me now Brush my hair And kissle me some more Kissle me some more Kissle me some more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beerball Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 SKOOBY'S Song ( heavy metal ) Jade, on a concave afternoon, Paid, with a lisp but coming through, Weighed, but like a rock that breaks in two, Something gone arye, somethings run amuck, Like to get away, but I think I'm stuck, and your invited back next week to this locality, to have a heaping helping of my post insanity, this is SKOOBY's Song , filled with snakes and snails and puppy dog trails, So don't take your shoes off, but ya'll come back now, ya hear !!! lol, this is an actual song that my nephew sings really well now, so thanks SKOOB, your an inspiration to all of us Hey, I like that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dib Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 The Beverly Hillbillies are spinning in their graves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hoodoo voodoo, seven twenty one twoHaystacka hostacka, ABC High poker, low joker, ninety-nine-a-zero Sidewalk, streetcar, dance a goofy dance Blackbirdy, bluejay, one, two, three, four Trash sack, jump back, EFG Biggy hat, little hat, fatty man, skinny man Grasshopper greensnake, hold my hand Hoodoo voodoo, chooka-chooky-choo-choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Momma cat, Tommy cat, diapers on my clothes line Two, four, six, eight, I run and hide Pretty girl, pretty boy, pony on a tin can I'll be yours, you'll be mine Hoodoo voodoo, chooka-chooky-choo-choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Jinga jangler, tinga lingle, picture on a bricky wall Hot and scamper, foamy lather, huggle me close Hot breeze, old cheese, slicky slacky fishy tails Brush my hair, kissle me some more Hoodoo voodoo, chooka chooky choo choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Hoodoo voodoo, chooka chooky choo choo True blue, how true, kissle me now Kissle me now Brush my hair And kissle me some more Kissle me some more Kissle me some more Good rap lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 The Beverly Hillbillies are spinning in their graves. I'm actually trying to incorporate some of the Beverly Hillbillies song melody into the end of the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Fischer Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Good rap lyrics You're close. Woody Guthrie (sung by Wilco) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayFinkle Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 My Heaven is in your Fart As I look across the distance that stands between us, the mountains, the Oceans, the deserts, they all seem small in comparison to you. I can see you standing there, waving, smiling, waiting for me to catch a whiff of your latest brand. With every step I take, the pungent odor increases. The dangers I face are just a testament of my love for you, nothing will stop me, nothing will stand in my way. As my journey nears its end, my body grows weak from the smell, but my resolve stiffens. Now many Legions stand before me. With sword in my hand, the warrior in me awakens. The path I make is set in stone, right from the start, straight through the fart. The wounds I take are fatal, my lungs burn, my vision fails me, it smells so bad I can taste it. Please Lord, let me see her face, let me feel her touch, just once before I go, please, its all I ask. I see you standing before me, then kneeling down, you spread your cheeks, just inches from my face. Tears of laughter, tears of sadness, tears from the napalm that just came out of your ass. So many things I want to say, I want you to know, what did you eat, did something die in your ass. Dying in your arms is better than living without you. As I say goodbye, and you lift the covers releasing me from the dutch oven, know that I love you, I have always loved you, will always love you, My Heaven is in your fart... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricojes Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 My Heaven is in your Fart That stinks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 You're close. Woody Guthrie (sung by Wilco) and I was close you say, geeesh, thanks , but not that close, lol, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dog14787 Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 SKOOBY'S Song ( heavy metal ) Jade, on a concave afternoon, Paid, with a lisp but coming through, Weighed, but like a rock that breaks in two, Somethings gone arye, somethings run amuck, Like to get away, but I think I'm stuck, and your invited back next week to this locality, to have a heaping helping of my post insanity, this is SKOOBY's Song , filled with snakes and snails and puppy dog trails, So don't take your shoes off, but ya'll come back now, ya hear !!! lol, this is an actual song that my nephew sings really well now, so thanks SKOOB, your an inspiration to all of us Listing to the side of Lunacy, Movements of the Moon passing over me, Washing away my reality, played in a chord that should never be, this is SKOOBY's Song, ya'll come back now, ya hear!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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