SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Posted November 7, 2008 Hey everybody, I just finished an article on Brandon Stokley and what he did last night to help the Broncos win. I'm in college and hope to be a professional sports writer or broadcaster some day, so any and all feedback is helpful. You can leave comments on the blog page as well. Thanks! http://wvbr.com:9010/index.php?page=sportsblog
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Posted November 7, 2008 That link is bush league how so?
Pete Posted November 7, 2008 Posted November 7, 2008 how so? I think he means it should be something like check out my article!
Beerball Posted November 7, 2008 Posted November 7, 2008 how so? I've gotten 'page cannot be displayed' the two times I've tried to open it up...
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Posted November 7, 2008 I've gotten 'page cannot be displayed' the two times I've tried to open it up... Hmm interesting.
RayFinkle Posted November 7, 2008 Posted November 7, 2008 Nice read, although I would question the number of 6'5" 272lb linebackers in the league.
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Posted November 7, 2008 Nice read, although I would question the number of 6'5" 272lb linebackers in the league. Yeah haha I guess my math was a little fuzzy on that one.
stuckincincy Posted November 7, 2008 Posted November 7, 2008 Hey everybody, I just finished an article on Brandon Stokley and what he did last night to help the Broncos win. I'm in college and hope to be a professional sports writer or broadcaster some day, so any and all feedback is helpful. You can leave comments on the blog page as well. Thanks! http://wvbr.com:9010/index.php?page=sportsblog Your link works now. Good write, SATM. Spelling, syntax, usage, case agreement - well done. Good, topical subject, nicely expressed.
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Posted November 7, 2008 Your link works now. Good write, SATM. Spelling, syntax, usage, case agreement - well done. Good, topical subject, nicely expressed. Well thank you very much cincy.
HopsGuy Posted November 8, 2008 Posted November 8, 2008 Not bad. I'd just add that Marshall's glove was both black and white and was to be a symbol of unification in the light of Obama's win on Tuesday. Also, Marshall mentioned in the post-game PC that Stokley is a savvy vet implying that he respects him. There's hope for the kid. Good stuff. Keep at it.
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