SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Hey everybody, I just finished an article on Brandon Stokley and what he did last night to help the Broncos win. I'm in college and hope to be a professional sports writer or broadcaster some day, so any and all feedback is helpful. You can leave comments on the blog page as well. Thanks! http://wvbr.com:9010/index.php?page=sportsblog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndZoneCrew Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 That link is bush league Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 That link is bush league how so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pete Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 how so? I think he means it should be something like check out my article! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beerball Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 how so? I've gotten 'page cannot be displayed' the two times I've tried to open it up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 I've gotten 'page cannot be displayed' the two times I've tried to open it up... Hmm interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayFinkle Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Nice read, although I would question the number of 6'5" 272lb linebackers in the league. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Nice read, although I would question the number of 6'5" 272lb linebackers in the league. Yeah haha I guess my math was a little fuzzy on that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuckincincy Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Hey everybody, I just finished an article on Brandon Stokley and what he did last night to help the Broncos win. I'm in college and hope to be a professional sports writer or broadcaster some day, so any and all feedback is helpful. You can leave comments on the blog page as well. Thanks! http://wvbr.com:9010/index.php?page=sportsblog Your link works now. Good write, SATM. Spelling, syntax, usage, case agreement - well done. Good, topical subject, nicely expressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Your link works now. Good write, SATM. Spelling, syntax, usage, case agreement - well done. Good, topical subject, nicely expressed. Well thank you very much cincy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HopsGuy Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Not bad. I'd just add that Marshall's glove was both black and white and was to be a symbol of unification in the light of Obama's win on Tuesday. Also, Marshall mentioned in the post-game PC that Stokley is a savvy vet implying that he respects him. There's hope for the kid. Good stuff. Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLZFAN4LIFE Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 What's an Artice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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