26CornerBlitz Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Bills enjoying their share of talent from the 757 The coastal Virginia area has produced a countless number of professional athletes over the years, and the Bills have three such products on their roster.
Dirtbag Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 somewhere, chris brown is turning over in his grave.
Stanley Lombardi Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Her writing is cringe-inducing. I beg to differ. She's got her own heartfelt style, born of a different outlook and emphasis. She brings out the person behind the facemask, and there are many readers who will seek out what she writes while studiously avoiding Carucci, Graham, Sullivan, or Joe B. Perhaps the Bills website is looking for those readers. Perhaps it ain't all about you.
YoloinOhio Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 (edited) I thought it was good. She's an intern. Nice job, Erin. Edited August 9, 2015 by YoloinOhio
Dirtbag Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 I beg to differ. She's got her own heartfelt style, born of a different outlook and emphasis. She brings out the person behind the facemask, and there are many readers who will seek out what she writes while studiously avoiding Carucci, Graham, Sullivan, or Joe B. Perhaps the Bills website is looking for those readers. Perhaps it ain't all about you. thanks for your input, jim.
SageAgainstTheMachine Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 I beg to differ. She's got her own heartfelt style, born of a different outlook and emphasis. She brings out the person behind the facemask, and there are many readers who will seek out what she writes while studiously avoiding Carucci, Graham, Sullivan, or Joe B. Perhaps the Bills website is looking for those readers. Perhaps it ain't all about you. I like articles that reveal the person behind the face mask. Ms. Kelly is trying too hard to do that, and landing on a lot of sentimental cliches.
LeGOATski Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 I like articles that reveal the person behind the face mask. Ms. Kelly is trying too hard to do that, and landing on a lot of sentimental cliches. Cliches thrive in the sports world, don't they? I see where you're coming from, though. I like her ideas, but her writing could use another proof-reader or two.
Dirtbag Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Cliches thrive in the sports world, don't they? Dude, she seriously wrote this: Where our character is forged in the crucible of memories made, dreams come true, and nightmares endured. Where hopes are carved—from the wounds and scars, joys and sorrows, triumphs and tragedies that prepare us for the battlefield we call life. It is here that heroes are born and legends are made.
LeGOATski Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Dude, she seriously wrote this: Where our character is forged in the crucible of memories made, dreams come true, and nightmares endured. Where hopes are carved—from the wounds and scars, joys and sorrows, triumphs and tragedies that prepare us for the battlefield we call life. It is here that heroes are born and legends are made. I know. It sounds like it came straight from an NFL films video. I love it, though.
Buffalo Barbarian Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Thaught it was Jim's Daughter for a sec the opening paragraph was over dramatic. I wouldn't be bragging about EJ n TT
26CornerBlitz Posted August 10, 2015 Author Posted August 10, 2015 Thaught it was Jim's Daughter for a sec the opening paragraph was over dramatic. I wouldn't be bragging about EJ n TT Contemplate longer because it is.
Buffalo Barbarian Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Contemplate longer because it is. ooops, didn't expect so much harshness against her so I didn't think it could be her.
atlbillsfan1975 Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 I know. It sounds like it came straight from an NFL films video. I love it, though. I can hear the music playing in the background. The one with the slow motion of Lynn Swann I think?!
bbb Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 She's only 20 or so. With her poise, looks, access, name recognition, etc.I think she'll do well in the media. Most likely, in front of the camera.
Blokestradamus Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 She could write the confession of murdering my family in my own blood and I'd still love that girl.
C.Biscuit97 Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Thaught it was Jim's Daughter for a sec the opening paragraph was over dramatic. I wouldn't be bragging about EJ n TT I won't be bragging about most of your posts either. Landry Jones looked great. And Erin Kelly is perfect.
stony Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Holy crap. Some made this seem like a 4th grader wrote it. Not a bad effort.
C.Biscuit97 Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Holy crap. Some made this seem like a 4th grader wrote it. Not a bad effort. You don't get it. Most posters here are went to Ivy League schools; look like Brad Pitt; and could have played if the NFL if it didn't pay less than their current job.
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