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what do you mean!!! igot 5 words then seven words than five more

 

 

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BillsFanNC, for some reason I could see your avatar saying exactly the same thing that billsfan in n.h just did.

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Receiver spread wide

Brady looks up at the slot

Giselle waits anxious

 

:cry: I bet that is a beautiful sight.

 

BTW: That is actually an outstanding haiku.

 

From WIKI: The essence of haiku is "cutting". This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images (RECEIVER :thumbsup: ) or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them (SLOT :blush: ), a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation (GISELLE :P ) and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.

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So beautiful in it's simplicity, I'm going to steal one from a Miami haiku thread posted a few years ago.

 

I hate New England

God how I hate New England

I hate New England

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