"I had always been more interested in writing fiction over non-fiction, however being open to writing in all ways, I gave news stories a shot. In my final year of high-school I wrote my first article for the Toronto Star, which got published; I remember the feeling was unmatched. Up until then I had only had my ....."
It took me about five seconds to find this writing sample of yours.-You have managed to create a disaster in two mere run-on sentences. Congratulations.